Today's posts is about my descriptive writing. So I think every week we get a new prompt for writing. This weeks prompt is a haunted house. It had to be 3 or 4 paragraphs. Miss Scott warned me about my descriptive writing because it was almost a story.
Here is my piece of writing.
One dark evening I walked through a forest, it was a cold and misty night. I saw a haunted scary house. I could see bright red flashing lights in some parts of the haunted scary house. The haunted house had squeaking noises. It house had broken boards holes in the roof.
As I walked closer to the house it was misty. The fog was creeping above the haunted house. I could feel it’s soft skin as I touched it. It started creeping up on the haunted house slowly.
Bats appeared above the haunted house. They went down to the house making holes in the haunted house. As I walk forward I could feel dead trees roots beneath my feet.
I walked forward onto the broken glass a board crunch beneath my feet. I open the door it was all slimy. Suddenly the door open and a high voice appeared.
“ Ye ha ha ha ha” It sounded like a witch."
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