Today's post is about my descriptive writing. So for writing we have to write our name in a padlet and describe the picture prompt. It was a valley. After that we had to write a descriptive writing about the picture prompt it also had to flow.
Here is my descriptive writing.
I was in a mysterious valley that had lots of lovely straight dark green trees and bushes. The humongous rocky Mountains had a bit of white glittering snow as the winter sun came out high. There was also a beautiful clear fresh cyan blue river along the side. The glittering white snow was starting to melt bit by bit.
As I walked through the mysterious green valley with huge rocky Mountains. I could feel the air passing by. It was so nice walking through the mysterious valley. The wind was so cool
I carried walking. There were lots of different fantastic flowers on the soft green grass. They didn’t smell that good. There was a big breeze some of the flowers got blown away into the distance of the mysterious valley.
The mysterious valley with huge rocky mountains was foggy. Clouds filled the sky up. The beautiful winter sun went away. The Clouds were so dark that they it started raining hard.I searched around the rocky craggy mountains for a dark damp cave so I could keep out of the rain.
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