Today's post is about last weeks descriptive writing. So we had to describe a picture prompt and write it on the a padlet. The picture was a beach. Then we had to write it on our group google doc.
Here is my writing.
I was at the beach on a lovely bright sunny day. I was staying at a hotel. The bright sun was shining at the sand as the waves were going away.
Soft smooth sand was heating up by the bright sparkling sun. The waves were washing sand and onto the surface. I could see the light reflection of a rainbow in the water. The clouds were moving along the sky as the breeze came along.
The sun went high in the sky. The clouds were clearing up until the clouds were gone. It was quite hot the ocean was bright and warm. The blazing sun was really shiny. The sea was washing sand back on and taking a bit back into the sea. I could see my hotel at the end of the beach
Waves were also splashing about as the sea went away. There was a strong breeze and the clouds filled the bright blue sky.The sun started setting down. No one was on the beach It was just me. Later on the day I went home. It was night time.
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