Today I am doing a blog post about our asttle writing. Yesterday in the morning at writing time our class did a asttle writing. The asttle was for an assessment. Miss Scott gave us a picture prompt. We had to write about the picture prompt. The picture was about a water playground.
Here is my asttle writing.
It was an awesome day to go the water playground. People were playing in the water splashing about in the blazing hot day. Umbrellas were up for shade. Yellow bars looked flaming hot. As the sun went higher into the bright blue sky. It was a steamy blazing hot day. The best day to go to the water playground.
People were splashing about on a hot day at the water playground. The bright sky was so blue that no clouds had appeared in the bright blue sky. Water went out of the trees in the water playground. Bright green trees were in the distance. The color of the playground stand out as the water got a bit warmer.
The clear blue warm water was fantastic blue. Going up sliding down the awesome slide. It was hot but it was the best time to go to the water playground. People were having lots of fun at the water playground.
People were relaxing on the blazing hot day. It was nice to relax on the hot steamy day. It was awesome to splash about. Everyone loved the water playground. It was the best thing to do on a hot day.
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