My Narrative Story

Hi guys,

Todays post is about my Narrative Story from last week.. The first thing we had to do was the Orientation. Then the other parts of the story.

Here is what you need to do when you are writing a narrative. Also here is the picture prompt.

Here is my narrative story.

Click, Click, Click, Click, went my camera. It was the afternoon. I was taking pictures of the worst thief  driving in a car. I was also thinking about  how much my boss would pay me. I parked outside Walmart mall. People didn’t know that I was a Secret  Agent Spy. My name is Derek and I live in USA Texes.

I said “ Oh bother does my memory card have to be super full” 

I walked to my car and it wouldn’t start. The fuel had completely ran out. 

Suddenly I fell into a hole. It led me to a pipe round the bend the thieves were there. Now I know where they were. I had to walk through the pipe another way so they would not see me. It was like  a maze. I didn’t know what way to go out. All of a Sudden I found a way out and it led to the bank.

I tried to find another way out. It led to the city so I had to run all the way home. I finally had a shower I was smelling from top to bottom. My Headmaster came and he said “ WHY DID YOU NOT FINISH YOUR JOB?”

I told him that I know where all the thieves were. He listened to me.

He said” We will find a plan to block the entrances of the hole. “ The police and all the some the Classified Agents Spies will help us” “ You will also get paid alot “ said my Boss

That evening we  blocked each way of the entrances without the thieves knowing. Next  me and some of  the Classified Spies Agents and some police sneaked, through the secret holes trying to find the criminals. The other police went another way. 

We saw them working out their next plan with their boss. “ 1 2 3” I said. We all dashed towards them and we caught all of the thieves except for one. We brought all of the criminals except for the one to the entrance of the holes. The other police caught the one last thief and they were all sent to jail for a lifetime. I didn’t need my camera for that whole time catching the criminals. I got paid a lot and I live happily by myself.

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