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Friday, 5 June 2020

100 Word Count Story

Good Day people,
Today's post is about my 100 word count story. This week prompt is a word prompt it is that’s when I knew I should run. It is 106 instead of 100.

Here is my 100 word count story.
The fire spreaded super fast by my house. That’s when I knew I should run away. I ran away as fast as I could. I rang the fire station they would pick up. So I ran to town to get them. We came as fast as we could. When we got to my house it burned out. The village was completely burned out. I had to find another house to live in I said. I found a little cottage by the city. I found a job and I work and work until I got enough money. Later on the day I moved to some where private.

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  1. Anonymous5 June 2020 at 12:18

    Hi Tory, It's Venice.
    I love the story but I think you need to work on your punctuation. Also try to reread your story it doesn't quite make sense. What job did you get? How did you got out? other than that I think you did a great job writing this story. keep up the great work. Just try to work on your punctuation.

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    1. Anonymous9 June 2020 at 17:25

      Hi Venice, Thanks for commenting on my post. Next time I will reread my story. I didn't put what job I got or how I got out because it would be over a 100.

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