Today's post is about my 100 word count story. This week prompt is gold, viola, searched, lost and ancient. The highlight parts is the prompt. My 100 word count story is 103 words.
Here is my 100 word count story.
There was a lost ancient gold viola. It was super ancient and rare that people went to searched for it. Many people in the town said that it was in the ancient pyramid of Giza. Inside the ancient pyramid was like a parkour. It was so hard for the people to get through. They nearly found it but they had to solve a ancient puzzle. Suddenly they found Viola. The Pyramid of Giza started to rumbling and rocks started to fall. The people ran super fast as they could left the pyramid. The pyramid was gone. The gold viola was in the museum.
Thanks for reading.
Hello Tory.
ReplyDeleteI wonder what an ancient puzzle would look like.I'd be quite keen to do one.What sort of puzzle was it that they had to do?.Was it a crossword puzzle or one that needed to be put together like a jigsaw?.
Hi Mrs Cassidy,Thanks for commenting on post. If I put what kind of puzzle it was it would be way over 100 words.
DeleteHi Tory, It's Venice. You're story is very interesting. I am glad that you were able to fit in the five words. I think you need to reread your sentences. The first part was great but I think you need to work on your last sentences. Other than that I hope you have a great weekend. Keep up the great.
ReplyDeleteHi Venice, Thanks for commenting on my post. Next Time I will reread my sentences.
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