Volcano Story ( Descriptive Writing, Narrative )

Hey readers,
Today I am going to show my narrative writing. So this week week got a picture prompt it was a volcano on a island with a boat.

Here is my writing.

Is another adventure happen as Seren and Tory were in Hawaii. They brought their older brother Kody this time. They spotted large black smoke were going out of the Volcano.  The ground started rumbling as the sky was a bit black. People on the islad watch the smoke go into the sky. 

Seren, Tory and Kody told everyone in the village to bring soap with them to the top of the  volcano and put lots of soap into the volcano. Everyone brought water to the volcano and tipped it in.. The they went down the volcano. There was a boat on the ocean. Seren, Tory and Kody went on a boat to the other island and told everyone to pack their stuff or find shelter. 

Two day came the volcano had more smoke. The sky was fully black houses were black to. A week came people had packed their stuff. Then the volcano erupted there was no time to get out. Everyone found shelter. Then the volcano erupted it was pink bubbles. Everyone unpacked their stuff and popped the bubbles.

Seren,Tory and Kody didn’t have to worry about the volcano erupting Lava.  All that Seren, Tory and Kody had to do is tell everyone to put soap in the Volcano. Everyone thanks Seren, Tory and Kody for helping out. The  smoke had disappeared.

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