Description Writing Week 2

 Hi people,

Today's post is about my Description Writing. This week we were describing a picture prompt. It is a birthday party.

Here is my writing

Plu Plu  the party blower makes a loud sound as I eat the delicious, crunchy, red,  juicy  toffee apple.

White sweet meringues are super tasty. “Happy Birthday" everyone shouted. The girl blew the candle with

excitement. “It’s time for the Pinata", Mum said.

The girl is surprised that it is a fornite llama pinata. It is purple and blue with a fringe. Smash  went the

pinata “Candy, candy"every shouted. Crunch, Crunch, Crunch went the lolly’s into my tummy. Candy is

stuck in my white gleaming teeth.

Sweet, delicious, caramel, creamy chocolate icing, sprinkles cake . The dark chocolate is super creamy

as I eat the cake. Sprinkles giving me more flavour to the cake as the caramel and chocolate melts into

my mouth.

 “ Party Bags for everyone,” Said Mum 

“Yay,'' said the children. “Pop" went the confetti,which is going all over the gray carpet.  It’s home time

now.

Here is the picture prompt.

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