Description Writing Week 2

 Hi people,

Today's post is about my Description Writing. This week we were describing a picture prompt. It is a birthday party.

Here is my writing

Plu Plu  the party blower makes a loud sound as I eat the delicious, crunchy, red,  juicy  toffee apple.

White sweet meringues are super tasty. “Happy Birthday" everyone shouted. The girl blew the candle with

excitement. “It’s time for the Pinata", Mum said.

The girl is surprised that it is a fornite llama pinata. It is purple and blue with a fringe. Smash  went the

pinata “Candy, candy"every shouted. Crunch, Crunch, Crunch went the lolly’s into my tummy. Candy is

stuck in my white gleaming teeth.

Sweet, delicious, caramel, creamy chocolate icing, sprinkles cake . The dark chocolate is super creamy

as I eat the cake. Sprinkles giving me more flavour to the cake as the caramel and chocolate melts into

my mouth.

 “ Party Bags for everyone,” Said Mum 

“Yay,'' said the children. “Pop" went the confetti,which is going all over the gray carpet.  It’s home time

now.

Here is the picture prompt.

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Wonder

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Last week for reading my group the Kiwi was reading about the story Wonder. We have to finish the book by the end of the term. 

Here is a little summary of the book.

There is a kid named August. His parents don't want him to go to school because he had like 27 surgery's and also how he looks. A week before school started, August went to the school with his parents. They meet three kids and the principal. There names were Jack Will , Charlotte and Jullian. August's best friend was Jack Will.

Wondoer Book

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100 Word Count Story 😃

 Hi Guys,  

On Monday was the first day back at school for Term 4. Term 4 is the last Term for the term. Well today's blog post  is about my 100 word count story. This weeks prompt is but I had to see what was inside. It had to be 100 words.

Here is my 100 word count

But I had to see what was inside the  treasure chest. It was  real treasure. I can’t believe Mum and Dad were hiding this in the secret room. I decided that the secret room was mine. I asked Mum and Dad very nicely. “ Okkk” Said Mum and Dad.   “ We’ll clean it up and help and help move your stuff” They said. “ Yay I can’t wait to sleep in it” I shouted. It took us 1 week to clean it up and 1 week to get everything in it. My Uncles came and helped. I loved it when it was finished.

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