Todays post is my last weeks 100 word count Story. It was a picture prompt. Here is the picture prompt.
Here is my 100 word count story.
It was halloween night. The moon was a full moon. The moon shined at the trees as a breeze came through. Suddenly the tree near the creek started creaking. Everyone in the town close to the creek we spooked by the sound of the creaking tree. All of a sudden all the trees started creaking more people began to disappear. The wind got stronger when it went through the town. Later on the day it was people they were doing it just for fun because they loved halloween. They celebrated Halloween and got heaps of treats. They were Delicious.
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Good morning Tory. Very creative story with good use of adjectives. I especially like the way you had me in suspense right until the end, only to find it was a Halloween prank. Have a good day.
ReplyDeleteHi Claire,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my post. Has someone spooked you before and you shouted?
Hi Tory. Your story has a very creepy vibe to it. It was almost like I was there and could hear the tree creaking. What did the wind sound like? If you had added more detail in the middle then you would not have needed to go on to getting treats for Halloween.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Scott,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my post. If I added a bit more words in won't it be over 100?
The wind was whistling.