Hola People,
Todays post is about my 100 word count for this week. This week their is only 1 prompt. The prompt is The deafening screams echoed through the cold night.
Here is my 100 word count for this week.
There was an echo coming through the tunnel .The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. Everyone was frightened by the spooky echo. One person's house was really spooked by the sound of the echo. Suddenly the house disappeared. Everyone decided to go through the tunnel in their cars. At the end of the tunnel there were a lot of scary birds. And there was the missing house. One of the birds spoke. He said “ We are sorry we were just looking for food” So we gave them food and they lived with us. The wise bird was the one who spoked.
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Wednesday, 13 May 2020
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Hi Tory, You have really 'nailed' the spooky theme with this piece of writing. Can you think of another word you could use in place of echo? I would be extremely scared if a house just disappeared! I don't know if I would be brave enough to go through the tunnel!
ReplyDeleteGood morning Tory. You are very good at writing spooky stories, lots of suspense right until the end. Don't think I would be very happy if it was my house that disappeared!
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