Hi Everyone,
This post is about my 100 Word Count Story from last week. It is about old fashioned castle.
Here it is.
I was in a creepy old house. When I walked onto the stairs the stairs moved around the old house. I found a room I walked into the room it was creepy. The I felled in a big trap. I got tangled in some old vines. I fell down through the vines then I was in a pretty land with lots of fluffy animals. One of the animals pushed me into the lake. Soon was back in the house . I went out I heard lots of people coming . So I ran outside and went through the door I was invisible.
Here is the picture of the Old Castle.
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