EasTTle Writing

Hi guys 
I am posting my EasTTle writing. I think it is part of our Term 4 test.

We did this to show that we understand our learning.

Here is our list that we did.

Here is my goal.

We also had to put in our Intro , P1 , P2 , P3 and Concision.
My writing was about Going to Time Zone and having Lunch

Intro : I the weekends I went to Timezone with my Aunty and Uncle. It was at Riccarton.

P1: When we had arrived at  Time zone we park at the top floor. We took the elevator to get down. Then we walk to Time zone . When we walk in to Time zone there was lots of people. Then we went to the counter and got a card to swap the game. The first game we played was Basketball I got the ball in the hoop five times. Then my Aunty had a go it was her favorite game she got it in seven times. We got tickets we got a lot. Next I played bowling the ball was not heavy I knowed all of it .

P2 : Next me and my Uncle played the Who could get the ice hockey ball in the hole . I got more than him because I looked how he was going to move. I had seven points and he got five points. Then we went up stairs. I played the car racing game I came second place in one of the games. Next we went down stairs and all of us played a shooting game. It was fun I killed six people. Then me and my Uncle played Shoot the zombies. There was a lot of them some of them even fell out of the sky. We won  two games and we level up. For the third round I die so we lost but we got lots of tickets. Then my Aunty played Stack it up for two rounds. She lost to she got 7 tickets. Then we put all of our ticket so it could be cut up. Then we went to the counter we had 130 tickets. I got a glow in the dark spider.

P3: Then we had something to eat. We went to Aunty Dai Dumping. Which was at Riccarton mall  . I had pork and coriander it was boiled . Aunty had pork and coriander to but hers was fried . My Uncle had pork and vegetable his was boiled. He also had corn and chicken soup . We had the dumplings with Soy sauce. When we had finished we went up stairs on a escalator . Then we went over the road it was a bit high. We went over the road to get to our car park. Then we drove home.

Concision:

I like going to Timezone I wanted to go there again.