Hey guys,
Yesterday I finished my 100 word count . This one is a bit different than the first one. This one is about a missing bear.
Here is the picture of the bear.
Also here is my 100 word count.
The little bear is in a big town stranded on the path with lots of people. It must of have fallen out of a little kids hand. The little kid must of have seen something that they really wanted because it was so cool . They must of have forgotten that they had not recognise that the little kid had drop it teddy. The little kid must be very sad now. The little kid must be crying because they dropped their favorite brown, small teddy bear. The teddy bear was so cute . The little kid got it for their 4th birthday.
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