Hi everyone,
Today's posts is about my 100 word count story. This weeks 100 word count story is avocado, bones, purple, elephant and seahorses. First my 100 word count story was over 100. So I changed some stuff to make it better. Also the highlights are the words I had to use.
Here is my 100 word count story
There were Purple seahorses in the sea. One day they saw dinosaur bones. They were scared so they ran away. They ran to the top of the sea and an Elephant was eating an avocado. They laughed at the elephant eating an avocado. Because he had avocado all over his face. The Elephant got angry he try chasing them. The elephant fell into the water he was soaked. He got scared because there was a shark. So he ran out of the water but he trip over. The purple seahorses laughed at the elephant. His face was all covered with sand.
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